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Episode 43 with Literary Agent Ann Collette: Middle Grade Excerpt by Joyce Gerber

May 21, 2016

Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a middle grade excerpt.

Read about Joyce Gerber on our Meet our Guest Authors page (scroll down on the page to her bio).

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Click here to download the original pages from the middle grade submission from Massachusetts.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the middle grade submission from Massachusetts.