Episode 85: Afterglow by Christopher Roche
Episode 84: What Am I Rated? by Casey Hardt
Episode 83: The Eight Amulets by Girish Ramachandran
Episode 82: Rowenna by Erica Verrillo
Episode 81: Search for the Sunlight by Craig Thomson
Episode 80: YA Excerpt by Jennifer Sternick and Tom Wilinsky
Episode 79: Queen of Spades by Valley Shaia
Episode 78: Lost and Found Boys by Kimberly St. Lawrence
f you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 9:00.
Click here to download the original pages from the YA submission from New Hampshire.
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Episode 77: Where's Barnaby? by Wendy Sheehan
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:36.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Rhode Island.
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Episode 76: Exploring the Universe by Carol Malthaner
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 7:44.
Click here to download the original pages from the literary fiction submission from Massachusetts.
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About the Author:
Carol is a retired high school special education English teacher who now works part-time as an executive function coach. She has written most of her life, but she became serious about it twelve years ago after taking a Teachers As Writers course. She now writes almost every day in between coaching sessions, concocting vegetarian recipes, walking her dog, and caring for her horse. She is currently working on a novel set in Florida near where her family has spent time.
Episode 75: Science Fiction Excerpt by Nate Stovall
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:00.
Click here to download the original pages from the science fiction submission from Massachusetts.
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Episode 74: Short Story - Broken Rules by Lynn Leonard
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:40.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Rhode Island.
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Episode 73 at Hollihock!: Fantasy Excerpt - The Rulkurkh by Anders Cahill
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 7:40.
Click here to download the original pages from the fantasy submission from Massachusetts.
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Episode 72 at Hollihock!: Women's Fiction - The Death of Mrs. Dooley by Dorothy Lowe
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:10.
Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction submission from Massachusetts.
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Episode 71: Novella Excerpt - Of Men and Mice by James Kabler
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 6:42.
Click here to download the original pages from the novella submission from Pennsylvania.
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Episode 70: Women's Fiction Excerpt - Snapping a Line by Sarah Caruso
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:00.
Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction submission from Massachusetts.
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Episode 69: Oblivious by Gwyn Plummer
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:40.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story mystery submission from Texas.
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Episode 68: Short Story Mystery by Abhishek Indoria
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:18.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story mystery submission from Arizona.
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Episode 67: Daffodil Days by Melanie Leivers
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:00.
Click here to download the original pages from the young adult submission from Florida.
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